Harriet Gracie
Mr. Breaton
EWC4U
April 25, 2015
Summer Camp
Friday, June 11, 1999
Dear Liz,
I’m sorry that I didn’t write until now, I just got to the camp on Wednesday and needed to sneak this letter out to the post. It’s awful so far. They made us ‘reaffirm our gender roles’ last night; with brooms, vacuums and even those stupid toilet brushes. They probably just don’t have enough money for janitors. I can’t even believe I’m at this place, really. It’s like some sort of jail, but at least you can defend yourself in jail.
Sincerely,
Mavis
Sunday, June 13, 1999
Dear Liz,
Yesterday was the worst so far. There was a fight between this one girl, Casey, and the camp director. She didn’t want to do the ‘writing assignment’ where we had to write about our ‘dream man’, and the director had to haul her out of the mess hall. I haven’t seen her since. When I wrote about my dream man, it was mainly just you, but without boobs. I copied it and added it to this envelope.
Miss you terribly,
Mavis
Wednesday, June 16, 1999
Dear Liz,
This letter is fairly late, I’m sorry. I got in trouble on Monday and was quarantined for two days, ‘cause I hugged Casey when she came to breakfast that morning. They said it was ‘homosexual activity’ and separated us immediately. They didn’t hurt me, so don’t worry, it was just a boring two days of sitting in my cabin alone. I can’t believe what life is like for some of these kids. A boy, Alexander, has fading bruises that he swears up and down are from falling down his stairs at home, but I’m certain it was his parents. He’s such a nice boy.
Hope you’re well,
Mavis
Wednesday, June 23, 1999
Dear Liz,
They found out I’ve been writing you, and took away my stamps and pens. Apparently you’re on the ‘no-contact’ list. Casey was kind enough to let me borrow her pen, and gave me a stamp in exchange for some chocolate, so here I am. I really truly miss you now, it’s ridiculous. The ‘therapy’ is getting worse. They’ve been doing crazy self-esteem stuff, making us recite hate speech about queers, talking about how disgusting they are, it’s awful. I cried myself to sleep last night. I just want to run away.
Still missing you,
Mavis
Saturday, June 26, 1999
Dear Liz,
I got another stamp from Casey, so here’s another letter. She’s been a great friend to me here. We’ve been sneaking out at night and sitting by the lake. Other than your letters, she’s the only thing keeping me sane in this place. She told me why she’s here last night. Her dad found her knuckle-deep in her neighbour. Apparently her mom fainted and everything! We’ve been talking about escaping, just taking a rowboat one night and hitchhiking to Toronto. I think she’s serious. I don’t know how serious I am, though. I’m honestly a little afraid. What if the counsellors catch us?
Much love,
Mavis
Tuesday, June 29, 1999
Dear Liz,
We’re doing it tonight. Being here is too much, so Casey and I are escaping. I’ll try to call you if I can scrounge up some cash.
I love you more than anything,
Mavis
Wednesday, July 21, 1999
Dear Mavis,
I haven’t heard from you in weeks. Please be okay.
I miss you,
Liz
Wow Harriet! That was great. Very mysterious. Left you to figure out what happened. Very well done, :)
ReplyDeleteHarriet, I really enjoyed this. Good job on the delivery and the innuendo. Very interesting thing to write about and I think that you did a really good job in portraying it!
ReplyDeleteThis piece made me so emotion, which proves that it is good writing. You had excellent delivery, and amazing confidence. You wrote it honestly as a letter, and I still laugh about how the mics came on at "knuckle deep". Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the rawness of the letters. The emotions that Mavis is feeling at the camp is well established and there isn't any space to miss that the camp she's being forced to go to is her version of hell. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYour piece was filled with emotion and that was great to hear. Your letters had such a natural flow to them, which just made them even more realistic and emotional. You did a great job presenting (including a few technical obstacles). Good work!
ReplyDeleteThe ending was a good touch as to not close their story completely, but keep the audience wondering. Wonderful writing and use of emotion. Good job!
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